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I stand in a field amongst flowers,
A sea of red surrounds me.
In the middle of the sea,
A single white blossom.

This single blossom,
A flaw on the red perfection.
In that delicate blossom,
I see you.

I touched that white flower,
My fingers lightly on the petals.
Soft perfection against my skin,
I want you closer.

My knees touch the dirt,
I reach for the stem.
The hidden thorns puncture my skin,
You have hurt me again.

A drop of blood stains a petal,
The white turns to red.
The flower disappears,
And you have left.

Still I long for that blossom,
Yet I move on through the field.
Every blossom looks the same,
Each one looks like you.

Each one is different,
Yet in everyone a similarity.
No matter which I turn to,
I am cursed to see you.
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Sometimes you have one of those people, who makes an impression on you. Those people cause you to see something of them in every single person. Can you imagine how that could haunt a person? No matter who you came in contact with, you would see another person in them. You would never be able to get away from that person.

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Wow!
that was good i love the imagery

--
After all else is finished
all you have left is
yourself
and a requiem for a dream

Is it pretentious to quote yourself?
:iconflaming-spirit:
Thank you!

--
Tenshi Uingusu 天使翼

"Quoth the Raven, 'Nevermore'"

Memento Mori "Remember you are only human."

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